Shauna,This is a fantastic presentation which you accompanied by a comprehensively detailed pitch - well done.One criticism is that some of the text blends into the background and isn't 100% clear and readable. Please amend this.I have awarded (unit 2) P2, M2 & D2, P4, M4 & D4 and P5 & M5 for this task (with the verbal pitch) and (unit 3) P2, M2 & D2 and P3 & M3.EllieB
Shauna,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic presentation which you accompanied by a comprehensively detailed pitch - well done.
One criticism is that some of the text blends into the background and isn't 100% clear and readable. Please amend this.
I have awarded (unit 2) P2, M2 & D2, P4, M4 & D4 and P5 & M5 for this task (with the verbal pitch) and (unit 3) P2, M2 & D2 and P3 & M3.
EllieB